I thought it looked bad but I don’t decide if it looks bad. It’s the person that’s reading this decides.
(She/Fae/He)
Things I don’t like about it:
She’s supposed to be leaning over a wall casually but faer right arm looks awkward in at position.
The face expression, she’s supposed to look smug but I nailed it in badly.
I couldn’t find a way to put the flags in- Penelope is Neptunic and Yukirangender.
To cover all of that up I just put him in the sun and added some shading.
In total I would rate it a 6.5/10.
However somethings I like about it, I liked faer original design. Ignoring the fact that it has the straight flag in it(that was not intentional) I think it’s cute. But I don’t think this drawing any better than the first one.
Uh yeah, I hope I don’t offend anyone. /gen